5. Interpret: How could you define the mood of the people on the bus at the beginning of the journey to Camp Harmony? at the end of the journey?
At first people was quiet except for a chattering group of university student. They look happy and excited that they gonna live in a new place.
At last, they seem scare and sad because that is not a place that they expect to be, food are terrible, small space to live and no privacy. Keep them like prisoner, live in jail.
you got short answers but pretty effective, in quick clearly explain your opinion about the story. i suggest you to stare using examples, in which will make you point more convincing. The world "gonna" definitely shows you writing style, however, "are going" is more an appropriate form to apply.
ReplyDeleteI agree Johnny. It is short, but we do get your meaning. I think that some more explanation would help though.
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