Name: Johnny Saturday, August 28, 2010
Class: 8
Happiness, love and friendship
My name is Johnny. I’m 8th grader at AIS. Now, I will tell you about my memory that I had pass through. I had a best memory to remember it, some is good, some is bad but I still can remember it. It’s changed my life and it was important to me. It’s started when I’m 4 or 5 years old and studied in a kindergarten. That time I was really naughty and bully because I didn’t know that was really bad. The boys liked to play with me; I’m their boss (honestly) it’s was true. I had a best feeling in my life. I’m naughty that the teachers were scared at me.
So, one day there was a new student came to class, her name is Mai. She is pretty nice and cute. She is playful and lovely. At the beginning, I didn’t care about her. I think she was nothing to me, why I had to care about it. Days are passing; one time while I was playing with my best friend, his name is Khang. The only friend I got back then. We are played in the garden at school; suddenly I fell down to the ground. My head hit the ground hardly. Khang and the others friends (also Mai) were trying to help me. My head started to bleed a little. Mai went to call my teacher to help me got in to a clinic. I’m still scared when I’m thinking about that moment. I think I never do that again. A doctor said that I will be fine soon, don’t need to worry. In a bed, Mai tried to help and got some water and snacks. She spent her time to talk to me. When she leaves the bed, she smiled at me. That was the best moment. I felt grateful to Mai. Next day, I started to talk to her more each day. We played together, ate together. She’s very nice with me. (I don’t know why). I like her and I think she also like me back. If she talking with you, I bet that you would love to hear it. Everyday, I bring candy or chocolate in class to share with her. Nobody knew that we like each other. Finally, my birthday come. We celebrated in class. We are doing that because it’s more fun, we can enjoy it. My best friends gave me their presents. Most of the presents is cartoon movie and toys. Mai give me a big present, I don’t’ know what is inside. It’s light not heavy. She kiss me at the cheek….I feel shy that time. I said thank you for the present and get back to the party. We play, sing, and eat until night. Approximately 5 or 6 p.m. That day I feel really tired, my dad had to caring me to the room. That night is awesome, incredible. That is my best birthday ever. I can’t believe that she kissed me. That is Friday, so I have to wait until Monday to kiss her back. Early Monday’s morning, first day of the week, I running to a class, try to find her. But she isn’t there, I’m looking for her all of the school, ask many people… She is gone (not died) she move to another school without say goodbye. I’m really sad that day, I cried all the day…Khang try to help me to get better. Days pass and I get over it, just still a little sad, though. Everyday, I try to forget her, but I just couldn’t. I heard someone said that she move to U.S with her parents and live there. I think I can forget it now, she will be happy in US. I grew up with Khang. He is my best friend, while in summer. He makes a plan to go to Da Lat. He invited me to going with him too. So I can’t forget anything in the past, and continue to move on. It’s really a fun day. I spend all my time to play with him. We see cartoon, eat snack, and play soccer. His father is really nice to me; he gave me some money to buy toys or souvenir. I think I’m in heaven these day, eat and play all the day. One night, while I playing in a bed, Khang jump in my bed, we have so much funny that I push him and fell down. His head was hit very hard to a small desk next a bed, and broke the pot made by glasses. And it cut him bleed. That time, I just a little kid I don’t know that I was hurting him. Now I do, I feel sorry because I have done so badly. His father opens the door, and he was panic. He carries Khang to a nearest hospital to help him get better. He will be ok, a doctor said. Khang knew that I was pushing him and make hurt, but he forgave me. He is really nice and truthful.
Now we still are friend, sometimes we call to each other to chat. And Mai, I just found her name in face book in US, now she is famous because she is a singer when she was a child. Maybe I will try to get her and realize me. So, that is part of my best memory in my life that I never forget it.
THE END!!!
that is nice, johnny, but i suggest you to look over your grammar again. however, great jobs!
ReplyDeleteGood story Johnny. I especially like the humorous parts. I want you to develop your ideas more though. Tell us your feelings about things. Why do you want to look up Mai? Also stick to one event and use more descriptive language. Keep up the good work and hard effort.
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